Nectar

[mab]

A star is plucked from the sky:
Black hole,
as a child sings to the moon,

The space is filled
And dazzles the night.

Drifting in and out of consciousness,
The lotus nectar spills.

A world of hallucination
And free sex.

A pussy cat licks her parts
On a bed of feathered down.

Vast, the Universe;
Inconceivable.

Entwined in carnal enterprise,
Love does not exist.

Coming down,
Reality breaks the rising sun.
The mind reels out of touch.

Looking up, we live in an orb,
Spinning, spinning in space
Along with my eyes.

Sweet intoxication.
Do you hear its music?

Comments

[mystified13.livejournal.com]

Really very nice, and evocative.

[kit-luve.livejournal.com]

very good. not my fav form of poetry but it all seems to work together in its own way. is this how you normally write poems or do you have a dif form that you favore more?

i hope this is ok fo rme to do.

[moronicblooze.livejournal.com]

my cold heart.

you can see me coming from a mile away.

the birds begin to sing

the grass dances in the wind

everything dead becomes living again


you can see me comnig from a mile away

i plant seeds of hatred for myself

i replace the books on your shelf

i replace heaven with hell

~

i've turned cold, i am getting old, for happieness i mourn,

dont let me unfold, don't let my story be told, before God i've
sworn.

i hate my heart, it feels only love,
so i'll do as i please, to unleash this dove,
cry if i may, cry if i might
mourn dears of hate before me, your pain, my delight

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i hope this is ok. i took about 15 minutes to type this up. i'm just
trying to show you how much i liked your poem, by giving you a
unique one of mine :)

i figure it's a good sign of how much i liked reading yours :D

-Nick

[(Anonymous)]

"A pussy cat licks her parts
On a bed of feathered down." I especially love this.

A very vivid poem with beautiful imagery

It's simple, in it's complexity (if that makes sense)

I really like this

[tearmeagain.livejournal.com]

On a bed of feathered down." I especially love this.

A very vivid poem with beautiful imagery

It's simple, in it's complexity (if that makes sense)

I really like this

(sorry I forgot to login the first time)

Bitter Stellar

[shadow-vagabond.livejournal.com]

A fleshy world meets her rocks
only when gravity overtakes
the original fire, the one that sparked us all.

Take a man and a handful of sand
and there you have life,
a temporary thrust,
then a slow, wearing away
as we compete to ignite
another generation
of death's patients
waiting to be cured of knowledge and thought.

Hopefully, there's more to this world than meets the eye.

so you find sweetness in the stellar?
just let me know how many licks it takes
to get to the center of a Tootsie Pop
or how many jagermeisters lead to heaven
and we may find chocolate chips
before the cookie crumbles.

[jusanodagirl.livejournal.com]

wow..dis is awesome..thanks 4r sharing..xoxo

[exsrl920.livejournal.com]

beautiful and arousing