Poem: My Never Ending Story!

[mab]

So, life absolutely sucks. I quit my job today after working only five days. It was just a bad fit for me.

I pulled out an old poem of mine to post here. It's how I feel right now.

My Never Ending Story

I hate my life and want to die
trapped in a mind that's full of fog
I'm falling back into the night
and sinking in the nothing's bog

My shoulders bear far too much weight
and sickness rests within
Riddled with; emotion, Hate
my heart full to the brim.

Blood slugs its way throughout my veins
as if a poisonous venom
Just to move, my body strains
against the dark and then some.

I hate my life and want to die
trapped in a mind that's full of fog
I'm falling back into the night
and sinking in the nothing's bog


Yeah. That about covers it. What do you think of the poem?