Wow. That's very descriptive. I get some biblical sense in your words. Don't know if that's intentional or not. I especially like this part: "another generation
of death's patients
waiting to be cured of knowledge and thought."
That and the final stanza... Sweetness in the stellar and all of the sickly sweet things you relate to it. "how many jagermeisters lead to heaven"

What a cool line.

Thanks for sharing your work with me.:D

~Mab