i've turned cold, i am getting old, for happieness i mourn,
dont let me unfold, don't let my story be told, before God i've sworn.
i hate my heart, it feels only love, so i'll do as i please, to unleash this dove, cry if i may, cry if i might mourn dears of hate before me, your pain, my delight
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i hope this is ok. i took about 15 minutes to type this up. i'm just trying to show you how much i liked your poem, by giving you a unique one of mine :)
i figure it's a good sign of how much i liked reading yours :D
i hope this is ok fo rme to do.
you can see me coming from a mile away.
the birds begin to sing
the grass dances in the wind
everything dead becomes living again
you can see me comnig from a mile away
i plant seeds of hatred for myself
i replace the books on your shelf
i replace heaven with hell
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i've turned cold, i am getting old, for happieness i mourn,
dont let me unfold, don't let my story be told, before God i've
sworn.
i hate my heart, it feels only love,
so i'll do as i please, to unleash this dove,
cry if i may, cry if i might
mourn dears of hate before me, your pain, my delight
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i hope this is ok. i took about 15 minutes to type this up. i'm just
trying to show you how much i liked your poem, by giving you a
unique one of mine :)
i figure it's a good sign of how much i liked reading yours :D
-Nick